extended story

[zampar]

She walked slowly through the forest that she knew so well from years of travel. She held in her hands a single flower, as was her tradition this time of the year. She traveled long and far to find a different flower each year to honor her friend’s grave with, and every year she had to hurry back to be in time

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[eaivalefay]

This is awesome! Is it based off the roleplaying writing you used to do? (I noticed the wolf Zamp. :) What did you want to do with the fic? I mean, do you have plans to polish it into a short story, or did you want to turn it into something novel-length? Or posting it here as roleplaying fic? Depending on what you want to do I can offer my opinions on each angle. There are lots of fabulous details and ideas here, and you clearly know a lot about this world and your characters. I love Raven's epic voyages for flowers (and I wonder how that tradition started for her; did Jessa always love flowers?) And the war surrounding this refugee camp is interesting! I need to know more! :D