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zamwessell

Good Boys (4/?)

Jul 15, 2011 20:36

Good Boys, Chapter 4
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Erik/Charles
WC: 1800
A/N: Just posting and dashing again (crazy week), but know that I am reading and loving your comments and glad you're, uh, bunked.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
( At the next hotel they played chess. Erik beat him again. )

erik/charles, good boys, x-men

Comments 13

xmoonveilx July 16 2011, 01:47:39 UTC

Absolutely fantastic, Charles' inner struggle is just so lovely.

yaoichan12 July 16 2011, 02:05:07 UTC

Love this story!

lunafille July 16 2011, 02:22:49 UTC

Mmmm... this story... so deliciously hot, and I love the sordid-sensual line Erik straddles in slowly working to thoroughly debauch beautiful Charles. So vivid and sexy, the interplay between them both mentally and physically - that push-pull balance. Really exceptionally well-done. Love it! Can't wait to read more!

creeperlove July 16 2011, 05:12:34 UTC

I love that they keep up a stream of conversation. My head!canon dictates that they would. I think your characterizations are spot on. Also this chapter was freakin hotM

anonymiss731 July 16 2011, 05:32:25 UTC

Hnnng! Oh the bridge! Painful memories! Still love story to bits.

Side note three doesn't lead to four