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zamwessell

Good Boys (6/15)

Jul 17, 2011 22:34

( The next morning he'd woken up and seen Erik sitting on the end of the other bed across the suite doing the crossword puzzle and how queerly normal it felt made something shift in the pit of his stomach. )

erik/charles, good boys, x-men

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enderwiggin24 July 23 2011, 08:46:54 UTC

this is sooooooooooooo guhhh, you are drving me crazy!

zombieboyband July 23 2011, 16:04:24 UTC

LIKE A DOG IN A SWEATER.

ENDEARINGLY VIRGINAL.

Okay, so: I'd read all the other parts, right, and I was, oh, ho hum, very sexy, very sexy, sure, inhibition!Charles, sure--but it wasn't until THIS installment that I lost it and became utterly gleeful and fully became to appreciate the wonderfulness. Not the the other parts aren't good--they are lovely--but it was here that the voices really spoke to me and sounded on. ALSO:

she was perfectly all right and probably somehow ideal in regards to her ratios

This is perfectly perfect, entirely spot on, and SO CHARLES XAVIER.

And from earlier--I was crowing at FOR SCIENCE. \o/ Fun fun.

goddamnelectric August 5 2011, 05:55:23 UTC

I just got into this fandom and I'm currently shotfunning this story trying to catch up but I just had to comment. This has been amazingly sexy and I love the dynamic bwteen your Eric and Charles. So good.

“Morning, Charles,” Erik said. “Four letters, amuse-bouche?”
I snorted while drinking juice reading this and almost choked. It's lines like that that have me so in love with this story ♥

keio August 21 2011, 08:42:27 UTC

Breathe in, breathe out. Hnnnghh. My mouth all dry when the action just escalates, I LOOVE how you write it, the voice in my head doesn't pause either, and it's like a filthy, erotic marathon, punctuated by Erik's dirty talking. I LOVE HIS DIRTY TALKING.

Just... goddamn.

natanilik October 1 2011, 18:25:40 UTC

I am on a reread and just wanted to say that the link to the next chapter is missing here.

I love this story :)