BBM Picture Perfect Chapter 4

[zankou164]

Ennis was stacking glasses into a rack and biting his lip.  He pulled the sleeve of his white bar-man's shirt up to look at his watch which read 21.55.

“5 minutes,” Ennis thought, tapping his foot anxiously. If ever a night at work had dragged on for Ennis it was this one.

“Hey Ennis, you okay?” a pretty blonde barmaid asked in a concerned tone.

Comments

[bbmbeliever]

love it, more please!

thanks

[zankou164]

yep ill start chapter 5 tommorow :) im super glad you liked it, thanks

[brokeback1963]

Aww, Matt!! These boys are sooooo sweet and adorable.

I love the jokes, the laughters, all that sexy marvelous kissing!!!

Very good, sweetie!! :clap: :clap: :clap: Looking forward to more!!

thanks

[zankou164]

thanks tammy i wont be long with chapter 5 :)

[torry28]

Very nice story but how could you stop at the zipper? At least have Ennis discard some of his attire first would have been nice. Looking for some loving next chapter. I can feel them looking in to each others eyes.Strange how once mind can conger up feelings and odors just by reading someone else's words.
Thank you for a lovely chapter.
Torry

thanks

[zankou164]

hi thanks for the support torry28 :)

[tizi17]

hmmm.. not a nice place to leave us..;-)
but they are so sweet together.. really sweet...

[zankou164]

haha thanks sweet was the inteneded effect :) and bout were i left it i just hope i dont spoil that i dont really know what happens now im straight and i dont have a clue lol oh well... lol