BBM PICTURE PERFECT chapter 6

[zankou164]

Chapter 6

Jack sat at the breakfast bar tapping his fingers repeatedly and swinging his legs under his stool like an anxious child.

“He said twelve…it's half-past, I wonder if he got lost,” Jack thought, adjusting his white t-shirt.

Jack had spiked his hair up so it stood straight on end. He twisted one of the spikes with his fingers in anticipation

Comments

[torry28]

There is a lot of humor in your writing I enjoy that very much, just don't like Ennis being teased where it comes to tears because then I start, Jack is a little devil hope he gets what he deserves in a good way of course.
Thank you for you update,
Torry

[zankou164]

im glad you liked it torry :). i loved writing the bit where jack makes ennis cry it was just so naughty lol but i couldnt resist writing it in :P