Lost and found chapter 1

[zankou164]

Lost And Found

Chapter 1

Ennis lay still in bed, light shimmering down onto him through one of the number of holes spread across the filthy white curtains that had once upon a time been white.

He listened to the dripping water which fell into a bucket from a single spot on the ceiling. His eyes browsed the sparsely furnished room. A dusty bed-side

Comments

[jacks_key]

Intriguing start...Ennis and Jack from opposite sides of the finiancial spectrum. Can't wait to see where you take this one, Matt. :)

[zankou164]

thanks for commenting :), i hope you enjoy were i take it. i plan on making these chapters longer then picture perfect after this one but weather this will happen i dont know :P.

[poppyhoney_67]

You posted chapter 1, yay! Love the opening and can't wait to read more. :)

[gander123]

Off to an interesting start, I'm along for the ride! Thanks

thanks for reading :)

[zankou164]

its so weird i never received email comformation of any of these comments :( recently maybe ive changed a setting by mistake, anyway thanks for reading im putting chpater 2 up now :)

[bbmbeliever]

I'm in. Looking fwd to more.

[zankou164]

im posting chapter 2 now, thanks for reading :)

[cornflake2912]

More pleaaase :)

[zankou164]

thanks for reading chapter 2 is going up now :)