Lost and Found chap. 2

[zankou164]

Lost and Found

Chapter 2

Jack lay naked sprawled across his bed, delicately shrouded in crisp white linen sheets. He planned on getting up soon but he intended to make the most of his last few minutes of cosy bed time.

Jack propped himself up quickly, a slight look of panic on his face as he heard footsteps approaching from down the hallway. He

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[denim_girl2006]

Hey, I like your story. I read chapter 1 the other night (sorry not to comment at the time). I saw "StarBucks" and was hooked, heehee Well, I liked the rest too, and love the picture of what Jack looks like. It scared me at the first of this chapter when Jack heard someone in his house. Glad it was not an intruder. I liked the image you painted of Jack in his bed just before he heard the noise. :) This is interesting...should Ennis be uneasy going to Jack's house? Does Jack have ulterior motives or is he just a really generous guy....and very trusting too since he just met Ennis and Ennis is down and out and all. So many questions, try and update soon. Like I said, I like this. I see you have another story also that I might start reading.

thanks

[zankou164]

hi thanks for reading, the enw chapter is up :)... sorry i ttok so long my LJ hasnt been notifing by email :(

[bentgyro]

Good story so far, wanna read more!
Thanks!
HT

[zankou164]

hi thanks for reading, the enw chapter is up :)... sorry i ttok so long my LJ hasnt been notifing by email :(

Lost And Found Chapter 2

[bmshirts]

Things are looking up for Ennis and Jack now. It's nice that Jack invited Ennis to stay with him. Seems Jack really does have a great deal of money.
I hope that buttinsky Ella will keep her nose out of Jack's business when it comes to Ennis.
Thanks. Carole

Re: Lost And Found Chapter 2

[zankou164]

hi thanks for reading, the enw chapter is up :)... sorry i ttok so long my LJ hasnt been notifing by email :(

and Ella wont be a nusicence on purpose :P.. but hse is so nuts she cant help a little mistake :P but she doesnt interfear between them lol

[theperiplaneta]

wow, Jack seems to be seriously loaded, I'm curious as how Ennis will react to it. Jack seems a bit naïve to me, taking Ennis home with him after meeting him only for the second time, but I guess that's what makes him so charming and proves the unique bond between them and apparently Ennis feels it too.
loved the fast update, hope you continue this way ;)
greez Peri

[zankou164]

hi thanks for reading, the enw chapter is up :)... sorry i ttok so long my LJ hasnt been notifing by email :(

and yer Jack and Ennis are jsut connected since there first meet :)

[120cassie]

I read the 2 chapters of this this morning but lj wouldn't let me leave a comment..

I like the story so far...

I like the comparison of Jack being so well off and Ennis being down on his luck..Good contrasting descriptions. Loved the pic of Jack too..

Lots of questions to ask.. Hope they will get answered soon...

Ennis wonders: *Why did Ennis feel more comfortable with Jack who he hardly knew than he ever had with anyone else?”*
-Why indeed...

Looking forward to more..

Julie x

[zankou164]

hi thanks for reading, the enw chapter is up :)... sorry i ttok so long my LJ hasnt been notifing by email :(