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zankou164

LOST AND FOUND 3

Jul 01, 2008 21:44

Lost and found
Chapter 3

Jack turned the key in the lock and stepped into the hallway, beckoning Ennis in. The house looked every bit as huge on the inside as it did from the out. The hallway they had walked into already gave the mansion a modern and sophisticated feel - shiny laminate wood floor panels stretched out, perfectly spaced and varying ( Read more... )

jack, bbm, ennis, found, and, lost

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Lost And Found Chapter 3 bmshirts July 1 2008, 21:53:44 UTC

Jeez!!! Jack has GOT to get his key back from Ella! She's psycho. With Ennis now living there and attracted to Jack, and Jack attracted to him, she's the unneeded third person. The guys are never going to get things sorted out between them if she's going to keep popping in unannounced. I get the feeling she's more interested in Jack than
she shows.
Let's get to some m/m bonding now, friends then lovers!
Thanks. Carole

Re: Lost And Found Chapter 3 zankou164 July 1 2008, 22:09:20 UTC

dont worry, jack is going to tell Ella off :P, she has no more interfearing after this haha

Re: Lost And Found Chapter 3 bmshirts July 1 2008, 22:47:15 UTC

Good!!! Makes my day.
Thanks. Carole

jacks_key July 1 2008, 22:06:02 UTC

Oooo, the plot thickens! Ella needs to stay away from these two, so they can explore their feelings for one another. :)

zankou164 July 1 2008, 22:09:57 UTC

thanks for reading :), and dont worry Ella will back off... she may be nuts, but she's smart :P

poppyhoney_67 July 1 2008, 22:57:46 UTC

Did I say how much I like Ella? lol

bentgyro July 1 2008, 23:22:10 UTC

I knew I liked this story! It's got all sorts of possibilites and all are looking interesting!
Thanks!
HT

zankou164 July 2 2008, 11:16:58 UTC

hey thanks for reading :), i hoe my story keps you intrested throughout :)

poppyhoney_67 July 2 2008, 08:56:53 UTC

I posted a comment but its not showing :/ oh well...you know I loved this anyway, but its always nice for you to hear it again! Loved the description of the apartment and how Ennis reacted to it...and Ella, she is crazy but I like her a lot. And now they are feelings things....its getting interesting.

zankou164 July 2 2008, 11:18:45 UTC

its weird how the comment isnt showing... thanks for the comment and im glad you enjoyed :)... and Obviously thanks for being my beta :D