Fic: Episode Coda 14.12

[zara_zee]

So much tension and brotherly feels! I was late to the watch party, but once again I just wanted to play around in the brothers' headspaces a bit, so I coda'd again. :)

Title: Untitled
Beta: Not beta’d
Genre(s): Episode coda.
Rating: PG-13, Gen
Spoilers:  Episode 14.12
Word Count: ~ 530
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing in the sand box.

Comments

[roxymissrose]

YES! Fantastic idea on Sam's part--absolutely stellar dialogue on yours! ;D

[zara_zee]

Thank you! So pleased to hear the dialogue rang true. :)

[borgmama1of5]

YES! You address the very thing that has me freaking out--if/when Michael busts out there won't be time to react!

And I love the dialog!

[zara_zee]

Yep, that's what's got me worried too. I understand Dean's desperation to get in the box...then Sam and the world will be safe...every moment he stays out is a huge risk. So an interim step would be a sensible idea!
So happy you liked the dialogue!

[fufaraw]

Oh, thank you, Sam. Brilliant ideas, both of them.

And nicely done, you writer person, you!

[zara_zee]

Thank you! :)

[madebyme_x]

Yes! Timing is the issue here - will there even be enough time to for the box? I love Sam's train of thought here, and the horror of Dean's words as he tells Sam Michael's plan. Thank you for sharing this :)

[zara_zee]

Yes, that's what's got me worried. The timing issue. I understand completely why Dean's so gung-ho to jump in the box. He's terrified of Michael getting loose.

[jj1564]

Oh my goodness, this is so sad, so them, and Dean's gallows humour was perfect. I think your idea to put the cuffs on Dean is inspired (and a little kinky, hee hee!) and I'd love for Sam to come up with this on the show. I'm sure Michael is screaming out threats just like these in Dean's head. This was a wonderful coda to the episode *sniffles*

[zara_zee]

Thank you! I just wanted 10 minutes with the boys once they got back to the bunker. And I would love that too...I mean...come on Sam, with your big brain you gotta know how terrified Dean is of Michael getting loose...come up with a stop-gap that'll keep Michael at bay and Dean out the box!