Comments | zarrati: Fic: Crossing Borders (7/?)

zarrati

Fic: Crossing Borders (7/?)

Nov 14, 2014 22:35

Title: Crossing Borders (7/?)
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parks and recreation, fanfic, dictator au

Comments 14

shornt November 15 2014, 03:59:14 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I secretly am relieved someone else did Ben getting shot fic bc I've literally been stuck on mine since JULY

AND YOUR IS BETTER, SO.

Oh man. I knew it was building to one of them getting hurt, and it made the tension of this chapter so strong. THIS FIC IS SO GREAT AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH.

zarrati November 15 2014, 17:12:32 UTC

Thank you so much! This is just about the nicest compliment I could ever get. Also, I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE YOUR FIC OMG!

c00kie November 15 2014, 04:43:29 UTC

This is so, so good. I love the sexual tension and the intrigue and just all of it.

zarrati November 15 2014, 17:13:07 UTC

Thank you, thank you!! <3

nutriyum_addict November 15 2014, 05:11:28 UTC

Ugh! But! What? OH NOOOO! I can't wait for the next part! Write quickly :) Also, love the use of Andy's code names. Yep, Ben has thought about it...definitely. :)

zarrati November 15 2014, 17:16:32 UTC

I'm writing, I'm writing! ;) Thank you so much. Also, yes, I KNEW those code names needed to be used and Ben would have to be the one to say it. <3

sullen_aquarian November 15 2014, 18:05:10 UTC

Oh man, the tension in this story. And then the comic relief of Andy and his nicknames. And then back to the tension. Aargh! Who is the donor--he/she has to be linked the plot. You are killing me (in a good way) with this.

zarrati November 17 2014, 02:14:21 UTC

I love your comments because you're always making the BEST guesses. Seriously, were you Jessica Fletcher in a previous life? I will reveal nothing, but you're good.

Also, THANK YOU!!!

sullen_aquarian November 17 2014, 04:19:59 UTC

That's very sweet but in truth, I am bad at solving whodunits. I usually skip ahead to find out the culprit but can't this time :).

likeascience November 15 2014, 22:20:41 UTC

I think I might have said this before on previous chapters (and if not, it applies) but you do such a good job of building the tension and anticipation toward the end. I KNEW SOMETHING BAD WAS GONNA HAPPEN AND I WAS HOLDING MY BREATH TIL THE END. The last scene GUTTED ME oh man I can't wait to see what happens next!

zarrati November 17 2014, 02:16:40 UTC

THANK YOU!!! I'm not sure what it says about me, but the fact that I made you suffer a little brings me great joy. ;)