Comments | zazie11: Fic: Smaller on the Inside, Ten2/Rose, Drabble (200 w.)

zazie11

Fic: Smaller on the Inside, Ten2/Rose, Drabble (200 w.)

May 26, 2011 19:47

Another day, another Drabble.

Last week, I threw out a challenge to my Flist:

I offered to write personalized Doctor/Rose drabbles for the first 5 of my flist buddies who responded. The plan was/is to incorporate 1 or more of their "interests," taken from their user profiles, into my fic. The catch was that each of them would have to do the same ( Read more... )

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zazie11 May 27 2011, 02:39:33 UTC

Close... they always were in each others' space weren't they? So a diminutive cottage really shouldn't be a problem for them now...

There is no such thing as personal space, as far as the Doctor and Rose are concerned!

I'm so glad you liked it! :D

wander_realtai May 27 2011, 03:57:36 UTC

Aw, this is just too sweet for words!

zazie11 May 29 2011, 14:43:36 UTC

Thanks, bb!

Those two deserve a little bit of peace and quiet, even if only for a minute.

heintz57 May 27 2011, 04:09:27 UTC

Normality for tenII/Rose I think it is wonderful becuase who wants to run for thier lives when they have a new life to begin. Beautiful.

zazie11 May 29 2011, 14:49:36 UTC

Exactly!

In this little spin on what could happen for them in the parallel universe, I like to think that they never actually go back to that life. Instead, they start a new adventure where they become beekeepers and make major advances in intergalactic cross-pollination methodology.

:D

fannishliss June 2 2011, 19:01:29 UTC

oh yes... happy sigh...

and now Honey to the B is playing in my head. Again!!! :)

zazie11 June 2 2011, 19:22:46 UTC

and now Honey to the B is playing in my head. Again!!!

Well, here, I'm going to just shamelessly hawk my writing and give you a link to my last TTU fic, Have Your Cake (And Eat It, Too), in which Honey to the B factors into the plot, quite significantly!

http://then-theres-us.livejournal.com/273679.html#cutid1

If you're looking for something to read.

Thanks! - Z

develish1 May 27 2011, 19:00:51 UTC

this is adorable Zazie :)

zazie11 May 29 2011, 14:50:21 UTC

Thanks, Dev.

I wanted to give them a little bit of the sweet life - those kids deserve it. :D

ahedonia May 30 2011, 01:50:27 UTC

Aw, this was lovely. Favorite parts:

Diminutive does not adequately describe the cottage’s proportions.

They ride into town together and purchase two bells.
They become the Terrors of the neighborhood.
Of course they do! :D

Plus the usage of the correct plural nemeses. These kinds of things turn me on, I'm telling you. I just need to find a single man who can do this.

Not many 10.5/Rose stories have them settling in well and finding all they need is each other. I love that this one does, and the economy of language the drabble demanded really served this well. :) ::mems::

zazie11 May 31 2011, 20:29:15 UTC

Thanks, lady. :)

This writer's interest list just made me want to take them to a quiet place, carving out a little nook for themselves.

I'm so glad you liked the bit about the bells, and becoming the local Terrors - exactly! They haven't changed who they are, after all. :D

Nemeses - yes! I know that man is out there, just waiting for you to grab hold of his dangling participle! ;)

the economy of language the drabble demanded
-- That's the fantastic thing about drabbles, isn't it? It forces you to be judicious.

I'm glad you liked the overall tone - this theme is something I pursue again for them in the future. :D