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sablin27 July 18 2011, 20:41:51 UTC
Wow, poor Bluestreak! Having a panic attack in front of your CO may not be the recommended way of passing on vital information, but in any other circumstance it wouldn't persuade everyone the vital information is a delusion.

I'm intrigued by the use of the memory portion of the virus. The immediately obvious possible benefits don't seem worth the effort it must have taken to create such a limited, focussed effect.

I am impressed by your characterisation and the way you have shown that Prowl and Jazz are woven into the life of the Autobots in ways beyond the obvious.

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zea_taylor July 19 2011, 08:11:03 UTC
Many thanks for your comment. I really do appreciate the feedback. Yes, poor Blue needs to work on his communication skills, but I think the whole thing came as rather a shock!

I'm glad you're intrigued so far. I hope I manage to answer your questions in the coming chapters.

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playswithworms July 19 2011, 02:15:47 UTC
Wow, that's quite a frightenly complete memory wipe, if Optimus is confabulating explanations for two empty offices and three times the paperwork O_o

Love the "secret password question" that only Optimus would know. Third favorite color, indeed *sporfle*

EEE! The plot thickens! *bounces*

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zea_taylor July 19 2011, 08:12:51 UTC
I have no *idea* where the colour question came from. For some reason it just felt like something Jazz might do ,

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