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anavidbookworm July 24 2011, 12:05:36 UTC
They didn't tell Jazz or Prowl about the memory loss! What were they thinking? That's not something you can keep from the head of Special Ops or Tactical.

This chapter was very nicely done. My favorite part was when they cornered Prime in the Rec room and switched their roles. I'm hoping someone in the crew will be brave enough to take the first step with them soon.

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playswithworms July 25 2011, 02:02:36 UTC
I never thought of it that way before, but Jazz is right - a stranger with intimate knowledge is a scary scary thing. Can't blame the rest of the Autobots for their reactions, although I want to kick Prime and Ratchet about the toes for not being more up front with them before they got out of medbay.

Wonderful wonderful writing - everyone's safe, but I'm on the edge of my seat wringing my hands, lol

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