The Luckless King

[zeabos]

For many months on end. The king built his castle. The castle was the mightiest he had every seen, his closest advisors had met with him in the planning to make sure it was flawless. The Kings time, money, knowledge, and wisdom were all devoted to improving the castle. Finally, it was finished. THe King smiled from his glorious great hall and

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[discomfitor]

I see. It's one of those complicated metaphor jobbers. I can do that too:

However, his strength left him and he collapsed to the ground.The former king awoke some time later. He felt a weight on his forehead, and reached out feebly to see what it was

[zeabos]

On his feet the King glanced around once more at the rubble. And the site was one he would never forget, for the rest of his life. The thought of it made him shudder, but he accepted a helping hand from the other man and his shaking legs steadied

[anniekay]

Annie 2.0, you are the coolest person since Annie 1.0 It makes me sad that you're sad.

You know you are welcome in the Kimball house at any time for as long as you like. So come over, and I'll make you tacos or pasta or blueberry muffins (the only things I know how to make).

Feel better!