On Writing!

Jan 23, 2014 14:16

Finished my do-me-veela fic and came in at 12k which is AMAZING for me. The only thing that saved this from turning into 50k of me fucking around is the fact that it has absolutely zero plot.

Okay let's talk about fic/fiction writing strategyI've gotten 4 inquiries on my writing process for Azoth now, which is just mind-blowing to me since I never felt like ( Read more... )

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eidheann_writes January 24 2014, 01:12:04 UTC
I feel kinda redundant with this... XD

1-- Title: Sometimes it comes to me in the first bit of writing, but often the result of whining to friends and last-minute flailing and panic. My Remix had a title almost from the first brainstorming session, and my two owlposts came easy... but my minifest, I am pretty sure I spent more time banging my head into my desk trying to come up with a title than I did on the writing process otherwise.

2-- Ending: Sometimes I know the ending so well I do it first. I'm a fairly linear writer, I tend to like beginning to end just so I don't lose track of what I'm talking about. But what I often end up doing is write while it's easy, then when it gets hard, jump to the end and write that, then go back. I only have one fic I feel I truly jumped around a lot on (A Dream of Waking) as opposed to simply skipping over smut and leaving any sex scenes to do at the end. And I didn't like the feeling of that, I felt too scattered and like I made it more difficult since I lost my flow of story. But then, it's ( ... )

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sophie_french January 24 2014, 09:03:32 UTC
POV: I am locked in a fairly near 3rd person pov, with a single focus character. I don't do POV switches EVER. If a story starts with Harry's perspective, you can be certain you're going to be in Harry's head until the end with no jumps, be it 1k or 20k. It's not anything I have against switching POV, I just have no idea how you do it.

This is all so interesting!!! I'm the kind who likes changing POV, it even saves me somtimes! (except for the short fics).

For The Greyest Eyes, I was stuck with one of my character, until I decided to write in his POV. And after that it was much easier, because it had helped me understand his motives (even if I totally disagreed on his views!)

As for Pre-readers, yes, they are very important!

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zeitgeistic January 24 2014, 15:13:00 UTC
Not redundant! You are the first person to mention needing a capitu! Although I do agree with you that having a pre-reader really helps. Sometimes it sparks new ideas for me.

I also feel really scattered (that's a good way to put it) when I end up jumping around for some reason. I have to remind myself that it doesn't matter how blocked I'm feeling with Scene X, it's better than I'd be feeling if I wrote the ending, came back to Scene X, and realized that I'd have to completely re-write everything that followed it once I finished Scene X.

Interesting that you can't do POV switches. IDK if I'm better at one or multiple. I've written extensively from multi-POVs before in a single fic, but I've also written several fics all from Harry's POV. I think when it comes down to it, I just have to write ONLY Harry's POV or Harry+Others. I can never write just from Draco's.

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eidheann_writes January 24 2014, 15:18:34 UTC
I feel I'm a pretty even split between Harry-POV fics and Draco-POV fics. If you asked me which was easier, I'd probably say I find Draco-POV generally easier... but again, it entirely depends on the story.

So maybe I just have an easier time with the stories that happen to be Draco-POV. Don't even know XD

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0idontknow0 January 24 2014, 02:24:44 UTC
Title: Yes (usually). Or I might have a word that I have in mind that describes all of the things in the fic. The thing that always gives me a pain is the summary. I suck at those.

Ending: Usually it's just a vague idea of how it ends. Bla bla bla is the what the fic is about and I want this to be the end goal but I don't know the millions of things in between or the details of it. At times I'll know that I want things to be resolved in a specific way, but mostly its wibbly wobbly and in no way coherent for a while.

Complex characters: Ha, I'm fail and don't do this -- even though I say I will. I hate to admit it but it's probably because I'm pretty bland IRL. I'm also terrible at reading people. Writing fanfic is how I make myself learn about people because I'm forced to try and think like someone other than myself. Which is kind of fun. Sometimes I'll know what someone's past is, sometimes they're just there because I couldn't get red glasses out of my head and I formed a character around that pair of red glasses *rolls eyes at ( ... )

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nherizu January 24 2014, 14:49:36 UTC
Don't write when you're falling asleep?

THIS. lol. I once wrote when I was barely able to open my eyes, and the next day I ended up deleting the whole thing... orz.

Thanks for sharing your writing process!

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0idontknow0 January 24 2014, 15:44:43 UTC
I ended up deleting the whole thing

I hate when that happens lol.

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zeitgeistic January 24 2014, 15:20:50 UTC
whn you're re-reading when you're re-reading it.

Omg, I have this problem even when when I'm awake.

Your ending knowledge is similar to my knowledge. I usually only know the big ~result~ but how I get there, or even how the scene plays out, is often not decided until I'm writing it. Everything has to flow from scene to scene, and things stop "fitting together" for me when I plan overmuch.

Haha, <-- Also bland IRL. That's really cool how you look at writing as a character study of RL sorta.

YES MUNDANE THINGS. My fave!

Well if they're romantic or hot, I'll probably read the extra words. The only things that really bore me are excessive descriptions, but if it's a scene going nowhere? Sometimes that can work. Like, to show how utterly mundane the characters' situation is.

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awakenyourfaith January 24 2014, 03:53:08 UTC
1) I rarely start with a title nowadays, but earlier in my fanfiction writing "career" I wrote a lot of 'song fics', so I kinda cheated then XD

2) I'm the same :)

3) I look for lots of characterization and ways to make different things meaningful..

4) EEYUP. Though, oddly enough, in my case this didn't come into play with mobiles and cell phones, am I right? XD

5) Same.

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zeitgeistic January 24 2014, 15:21:51 UTC
Heheh I've done exactly ONE song fic. It was to Remy Zero's "Fair" and I am still embarrassed of it. It was so twee. (Probably more to do with my writing at the time than it being a song fic).

4. LOL

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awakenyourfaith January 24 2014, 21:07:03 UTC
It's kind of embarrassing how many song fics I've done in the past. So tween it's not even funny.

Hee hee XD

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ragnarok_08 January 24 2014, 04:02:29 UTC
Huh, where the hell do I begin?

1-- Title: Sometimes it comes to me in the first bit of writing, but often it's at the last minute, and I try to think of one that works with the story I'm writing.

2-- Ending: Sometimes I know the ending so well I do it first. I'm a fairly linear writer, I tend to go from beginning to end so I don't lose track of what I'm talking about. But what I often end up doing is write while it's easy, and then that's when the ending arrives.

3-- Editing: I edit the crap out of my words as I go. Redundancies, clarifications,spelling errors, misused words, re-phrasings, etc. Adding entire sections is just fine. But needing to do large-scale delete/rewrite makes me cringe.

4-- POV: I am locked in a 3rd person pov, with a single focus character. I do not do POV switches, none whatsoever My brain on any story just lovks in on a specific character at a specific time with a specific story and that's what my writing process is like.

5-- Planning: I plan a lot at times, and some things have a basic scene list ( ... )

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zeitgeistic January 24 2014, 15:23:26 UTC
Having pre-readers is THE BEST. It can really keep me on track or help me to figure out something that's *missing*.

Haha, I love how you decide when to end!

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lettered January 24 2014, 05:40:08 UTC
I LOVE THIS POST. Thank you for telling us about your process. I'm sorry I flailed all over your comments; this is just so interesting to me ( ... )

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sophie_french January 24 2014, 09:08:02 UTC
I LOVE THIS POST. Thank you for telling us about your process. I'm sorry I flailed all over your comments; this is just so interesting to me.

Same here!!!

He Who Must Not Be Normal: God I've bookmarked this fic, I so wanted to read it and haven't yet!!! Definitely have to read it!

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lettered January 25 2014, 06:57:18 UTC
Thank you! I haven't been able to read most of the fics from erised. I AM SUCH A SLOW READER!

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sophie_french January 25 2014, 08:55:13 UTC
I am too! And there are so many amazing stories out there, it just blows my mind!!!

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