FIC: "Last City", Harry/Draco, NC-17

May 10, 2014 11:20

Fic-claiming time. This is also the ~safe space to leave concrit~ post if you would like to do so.

Title: Last City
Author: zeitgeistic
Prompt: # 80
Summary: Twenty-four Twenty-three men, six cities, and one unusual sexual requirement.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): None
Word Count: 27,500
Author's Notes: golden_snitch12 asked for Harry on a wizarding version of The Bachelor ( Read more... )

public, con-crit post, fic-writing, fic, harry potter

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oakstone730 May 10 2014, 15:43:13 UTC
I loved this story -- it was brilliant and adorable. Hermione was all things amazing, as was Harry & Draco. Your writing is so fresh and clean, I just can't get enough of it.

AND, I think you've started a new thing -- revealing one's research search-terms. I love it -- brilliant. I'm tempted to go back and do a post of some of my searches. OCTOPUS DRYING -- who knew this was a thing???

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zeitgeistic May 10 2014, 15:49:09 UTC
Do it! I'd loooove to know what you searched for when you were writing your fics! It's so weird how I discover strange new things from writing fics. I had no idea that octopus drying existed before researching for Mykonos. Crazy!

Thank you, bb <3<3<3

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daleah May 10 2014, 15:52:39 UTC
I love this fic. I read the story three times. This means that I really like it. I like the line of development, I like all characters. Although I wanted to see a little more of the relationship between Harry and Draco.
I have only one observation if the story takes place in February in Greece it would be winter and Harry would find it difficult to dine on the veranda and lying on the ground in the sun.

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zeitgeistic May 10 2014, 15:57:19 UTC
Oh good point. I was thinking it would be warmish in February since Greece is so close to the equator, but it would still be winter there, yep! I should have double checked that. Thank you! I'm delighted that you liked the fic, and so grateful for your feedback. I will keep it in mind with my next writing project to try to make it better.

*Actually, wow, Greece is much further from the equator than I thought.

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daleah May 10 2014, 21:43:39 UTC
Yeah, I know - I live in Bulgaria, which is a neighboring country of Greece. ;) Maybe because of that this in your story impressed me. However, I repeat that this story is amazing <3

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raitala May 10 2014, 16:09:54 UTC
zeitgeistic May 10 2014, 16:14:14 UTC
Thank you, dear! Harry's such a trooper. :)

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0idontknow0 May 10 2014, 16:21:00 UTC
I so knew this was you! I don't know why but I did. It had you written all over it!

And I'm sure that if we all posted our google search terms we'd see some strange, possibly questionable, things.

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zeitgeistic May 10 2014, 16:23:05 UTC
haha I think like 6 people guessed I wrote this fic. Apparently I am realllllly obvious.

No doubt! I'd love to see some of the search terms for other fics.

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ragnarok_08 May 10 2014, 16:44:49 UTC
I really love this story - just brilliant. :D

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zeitgeistic May 10 2014, 16:52:08 UTC
Thank you, bb!

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