what conscience?

[zencup]

what
protest of crickets,
what fear?

i couldn't love you anyway:
not
after
bleeding
to death
on the sword
of your spine.

i hope you find home.
(i do.)

please stop
sending postcards
from my grave.

i'm only writing back this once.
it's just an empty envelope
addressed to you.
                                                            for Michael    

Comments

[k80fs]

are you interested in feedback?

i like the sound of spinal sword, myself.

[zencup]

I'm always interested in feedback.
However, I can't say "spinal sword" without giggling.

Are you home, now?

maybe...

[ioncedreamtyou]

i'm only writing back once;
an empty envelope,
addressed to you.

feedback on feedback: I'm of the opinion that 'spinal sword' is a tad corny.

Re: maybe...

[zencup]

I'm considering this, thanks.