Fic: The Twilight Between - Chapter 8 - Like I Ain't Tried It

[zenelly]

Title: The Twilight Between
Pairing: Zemyx
Disclaimer: KH = NOT MINE.
Dedications: to prettypixiechan. Because she is my lovely beta. All other mistakes are my own.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The thing that Demyx wants most in the world is a break from feeling the emotions of other people. He doesn't get that (in fact, it might be the opposite), but what he does get might

Comments

What have you done?

[xtorchlightx]

You cruel, unusual woman, you. That cliffhanger. THAT CLIFFHANGER. I will be thinking of it for weeks. And weeks. And weeks. I hate you so much right now.

So, couldn't spot any mistakes, but then again I've been re-reading this story from the beginning since about three or something like that since somehow it always gets mixed together with The Violet Room in my head. Least to say, I'm not at my best. I was not disappointed, by the way. And this chapter? OH GOD. NO WORDS. Why no words? Because those last two scenes wiped anything remotely cognizant from my brain. You evil, evil thing, you.

*Cries* (Also, I can't remember my AO3 password so I just commented on here instead. XD)

Re: What have you done?

[zenelly]

*cackles madly*

Yep yep yep. That was... sort of my intent. After all, it's... well. It's something. I know where it's going so there! *fistpumps*

[kiaarra]

Noooo don't stop it there!! You better not make me wait overly long for the next chapter! *fistshake*

[zenelly]

Ahahahah! I'll do my best to keep it going soon! <3