Fic: Heartless (1/1)

Aug 03, 2011 19:08

Title: Heartless
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Word Count: 2,239
Disclaimer: That '70s Show is none mine. None.
Spoilers: Pretty much anything and everything. Hyde reflects back.
Summary: A few, important things Hyde just has to think about. After all, it's Jackie. She requires a lot of thought and headaches . . . And ( Read more... )

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sugangel7 August 4 2011, 01:36:10 UTC
Honestly, you made me want to cry. I love these two so much, so damn much, and it still hurts to think we didn't even get the slightest bit of resolution on the show.

BUT I digress. Your Hyde voice is just superb, spot-on. That first section especially was just perfect -- she got him yet she always expected more, he could be a good guy for her just not the kind of guy she thought she wanted ( ... )

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firstyoufall August 4 2011, 02:07:44 UTC
Oh, your comment. It's everything I was trying to say with this fic. The frustration, the heartache he feels but never shows (or he might slip from the highest pedestal in the gang), the always-sexy. *TISSUES, JUST IN CASE.*

Thank you for reviewing, lovely. :)

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firefly1344 August 4 2011, 03:52:01 UTC
This was wonderful. It was sad, but a little hopeful at the same time. And it stayed true to the characters. I loved it.

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firstyoufall August 4 2011, 04:15:32 UTC
Thank you dearly for the review, especially for what you said about the characters. Glad you enjoyed it so. ♥

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folie_lex August 4 2011, 23:42:54 UTC
Pure Love!!!!

(and yeah... I'm still bitter....)

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firstyoufall August 5 2011, 00:23:11 UTC
Thanks! (Same here, always. D:)

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nancin August 25 2011, 15:18:07 UTC
Love this-you relly got Hyde right. I still can't believe how the writers screwed this wonderful couple in season 8. A travesty, I say! But you got it right! Thanks!

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firstyoufall August 27 2011, 00:38:40 UTC
Glad to have done the couple right in your eyes. :) Thanks for reviewing, dear. ♥

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