This is how you start a book:

[zer099]

"Detective Bart Lasiter was in his office studying the light from his one small window falling on his super burrito when the door swung open to reveal a woman whose body said you've had your last burrito for a while, whose face said angels did exist, and whose eyes said she could make you dig your own grave and lick the shovel clean

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Idk

[yavednichya]

I don't think it's bad they used a white person but the way she's grabbing the black person's face like he/she's below her seems wrong to me...oh wait, I forgot...it IS wrong.