heres a short passage from one of my stories

[zer0space77]

Nausea overwhelmed her as the drug started to wear off. It came in waves of sickness, her lungs closed up as she felt the sickness start rising from her stomach. Her head felt light, almost weightless on her neck. Her eyes were trying desperately to open, but at the same time she never wanted to open her eyes again. Air caught in her lungs as she

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[starfox_pulpfic]

Wow, good... why is this guy doing this to her?

[zer0space77]

i dont know its a horror story...who cares if hes strangling her wit barbwire....
^.^

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[starfox_pulpfic]

I have three different ideas for stories to write... One is about a couple by the names "Christian and Regan" which are just names for Anthony and I including a steamy first time sex scene... it's about an awkward (but lovely couple) that are friends and then fall in love... it's a sort of weak plot right now because I'm not sure what I want to be about. Basically Regan (me) has big dreams about becoming a director while "Christian" is majoring in Civil Engingering at Cal Poly and when Regan leaves awardless at a film festivel that Quentin Tarantino attends - he introduces himself to her and wants to help her become a well known director. But Christian is jelous because she's getting attention from big movie stars and such