Comments | zero_capital_z: Hold on Tight and Don't Look Back, Chapter 5. Killjoy-verse. PG-13

zero_capital_z

Hold on Tight and Don't Look Back, Chapter 5. Killjoy-verse. PG-13

May 20, 2011 23:24

Title: Hold on Tight and Don't Look Back, Chapter 5
Author: zero_capital_z, I might be remembered as evil_lil_hobbitPairing: Jet-Star/Kobra Kid and Party Poison/Fun Ghoul ( Read more... )

pg-13, jet-star/kobra kid, ray/mikey, party poison/fun ghoul, killjoys, gerard/frank, danger days

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zero_capital_z May 25 2011, 09:12:52 UTC

:D

XDD Sorry. The updates are a bit erratic cause of my work and stuff... But :D Glad you liked it! And yeah, I felt bad about shooting Ray... v.v

xoxxblitz7 May 20 2011, 19:13:31 UTC

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My heart, my actual heart! I love this, but you alredy know that.

This was my favourite part:
"We are so outnumbered here!" Ghoul called out, though instead of sounding scared, his voice was filled with adrenaline. Ghoul loved a challenge. He and Poison stood practically back-to-back, dropping Drac after Drac, ray blasts flying around them. Kobra's face was twisted in that slight snarl he always got when he was killing, shooting with both hands, littering the dunes with Drac bodies.

I love the image of Frank and Gerard back to back, and Mikey's snarly face when he's killing! :D ♥

Can't wait for more, I love that slowly, Mikey's starting to get more and more comfortable with Ray! :D

zero_capital_z May 25 2011, 09:13:43 UTC

I diiid. But I love hearing that you love it. And yeah! I really enjoyed that. <3 He's slowly getting there, our Mikey. Making progress.

Wow nasaneman May 23 2011, 15:36:41 UTC

I definitely got a livejournal account just to comment on your story. I needed you to know how much im totally in love with it!!

Your writing is brilliant and i appreciate it so much, its so hard to find well written rikey fics.

Can't wait for the next chapter! I've been checking religiously for the next chapter :P

Re: Wow zero_capital_z May 23 2011, 15:42:34 UTC

Wow right back. That's so nice that you got an lj just to comment! Thank you so so much!

I know. I find it hard to find them too.

I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow night my time (I live in Australia) so... less than a day to wait!

Re: Wow zero_capital_z May 25 2011, 09:11:53 UTC

Eep. Sorry. I ended up having work last night v.v But I just posted the new chapter! So... Sorry, day late. But yay!

Re: Wow nasaneman May 25 2011, 22:11:06 UTC

That's OK, i got it this morning so i printed it off so i could read it on the way to school lol!! It was so amazing may i say. Can't wait for the next chapter!!