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Feb 24, 2004 02:29

One verse
She kissed the sky and the rain fell like sadness came again
Washing away her makeup (running down her face
cheekbones, neck, and breasts, etc
all the way down to her toes)
And the little rivulettes form that
wash away her sins in red and yellow dye
She's got the drive. Gets up and gets away
Leaving
her lips on a cloud.
Universe

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odonurine February 24 2004, 20:28:43 UTC
prettyyyyyyy

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disconsolated February 24 2004, 21:39:49 UTC
that is veryvery lovely.

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xhurt_for_mex February 25 2004, 00:29:05 UTC
image in my head.

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kooncy February 25 2004, 01:13:52 UTC
You reminded me of this afternoon.
I walked three blocks with a letter for a mailbox.
But, the rain was half-assed snow,
and the red and yellow was black and purple.
A+

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zeroplusone February 25 2004, 11:56:49 UTC
=D

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marionettesque_ February 25 2004, 01:33:06 UTC
JOE.

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zeroplusone February 25 2004, 11:57:08 UTC
KARYN.

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