The Pianist [Chapter 11/?]

Mar 30, 2014 14:27

Title: The Pianist
Author: zetastation
Beta: matturemuser
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, fluff, kind of domestic Belldom? lol
Summary: Matt and Dom have a new mission.
Feedback: Yes, please!
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse nor any song mentioned in this story. This is a work of fiction and never happened. No offence intended. The photography from the ( Read more... )

[series] the pianist, fanfic, belldom

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adabliss March 30 2014, 22:42:56 UTC
Absolutely adorable! I enjoyed this chapter from beginning to end and I actually can't believe you don't like what you've written. I hope you can realise how brilliant this chapter was. It's like a watershed, the deep angst has passed and now the good things are finally happening. I'm really happy that Matt and Dom could have a time together while babysitting Chris's kids, even if Dom had freaked out here and there, but it was really cool nevertheless :)

In love with the end where Matt kisses Dom's forehead and then his cheek. I'm ashamed to say that I nearly screamed!

Boys sleeping in the same bed, wearing only boxers..... Love it.

Can't wait for more Xxx

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zetastation March 30 2014, 23:28:07 UTC
Aw sweetie, it's really good to know you think that way. Thank you very much, you're a sweetheart <3

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zetastation March 30 2014, 23:38:44 UTC
MERCI MERCI MADAME! LOL

<333

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zetastation March 31 2014, 10:55:57 UTC
Diabetes???? OMG LAURA YOU'RE HILARIOUS ILY! <333 Thank you very much for reading and commenting!!!! *-----* you can sleep in your underwear with those guys, I allow you Lololololol

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matturemuser March 31 2014, 09:42:22 UTC
Well, you already know what I think of this little confection, so please slap yourself for saying that you don't like it! And putting the boys into bed together in only boxers...what the hell were you thinking??? (queue evil giggle!)

Your ending was just superb as I told you. That kiss on the forehead was so adorable and perfect. Anytime you need an assistant plotter, I am happy to help!
xxx

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zetastation March 31 2014, 10:57:38 UTC
I'm slapping myself right now, don't worry lol

Thank you so so so much for all your help with betaing and assistant plotter, you saved this chapter <333

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kexprz2 March 31 2014, 19:12:23 UTC
Oh my god, my pretty girl <3 this chapter <3
Absolutely adorable!!! I loved it !!!
Falling asleep was an easier task now, especially when I could vividly remember his lips touching my skin, sweetly.
Oh gosh, I can't wait for moreeee!
I'm so freaking happy as always to see this fic updated, I love this fic, upload ASAP.
muak.

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zetastation March 31 2014, 22:51:56 UTC
Giiiiirl! Thank you so so so so soooooooooo much for reading and commenting! I'm soooooooooo glad you liked this chapter! *0* More to come #SOON XD

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