Title: The Pianist
Author:
zetastationBeta:
matturemuserPairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, fluff.
Summary: "You want a revelation, some kind of resolution"
Feedback: Yes, please!
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse nor any song mentioned in this story. This is a work of fiction and never happened. No offence intended. The summary corresponds to verses from the
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What? Yes, I've been here all the time admiring your wonderfulness from my privileged position of Beta, as you well know! I love the way you have set this up for the next part. The boys are finally starting to see the light, but I'm sure there is plenty of drama still to come.
I feel the need to be specific here though, so prepare for some quotage...
but no-one makes me feel safe like you do, Dom
This, to me, meant so much in light of the rockiness that they went through when Dom was pushing Matt to play the piano. I love that Matt has to come to recognise Dom as that secure presence despite this hiccup when he was feeling uncomfortable.
I looked for answers in his eyes, but I found home instead
This line is just beautiful.
I know you struggled with your inspiration while you were writing this chapter and in the buildup to it, but I want you know that it was worth the wait. When it eventually came, it flowed beautifully. Great job.xxx
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You're right, there's still plenty of drama to come *_* #SOON
I love quotes! *0*
That's exactly what I meant! Despite all their fights and hard time, Matt always felt like he could trust Dom and feels safe around him <3
Thank you sososososoooo much for everything! <3333
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awwwww beach scenes, I love them <3<3<3
and this
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The sheets that were previously covering us slipped off the bed as we rolled, Matt now beneath me. He hooked one leg on my waist when we parted to catch breath, and I started placing wet kisses on his face and his neck, dragging my lips down to the dip between his collarbones. I felt his chest heaving along with his erratic breath.
He let out a low grunt as I kissed his jawline, squeezing himself against my body. I looked down and found his eyes shut, crimson cheeks and parted lips, as I admired the perfection of his being. I loved Matthew so much, I truly loved him and now he’ was here with me. We were not drunk, this was not an accident or a joke.
It was happening. Finally. It was real. *
awwww so impossibly sweet
and Tom was about to catching them eheheheh ^^
and the end? awwww , pure perfection <3
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Thank you very much, Lu! I missed your comments so bad! D': Thank you so much for always support me with this story, yknow how much it means to me! I'm eternally grateful! Thanks!!!!!!!! <3
See you in the next part of this story ;D #SOON
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AWWW IT'S SO PERFECT SO CUTE OMG
I need more, Pam, this is amazing! You are so talented <3
Thank you so much for this and bring on part 2 like rn <3
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Xx, Pam
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