Itoshiki Rondeau

[johnwwells]

(A companion poem to this.)

Title: Rondeau of Despair
Summary: Itoshiki in the desert.

Comments

[littlelinor]

Pffft I love all of these, but I have to say the line about the vultures in particular was a nice touch.

[arikaihart]

I'm am completely incapable of offering any constructive crit on poetry (or anything else for that matter, but let's not get picky).

So I'll just give you PRAISE. <3'd it (as well as the companion piece, but I figured I'd just leave one comment).