Comments | zhoumi_kuixian: Coagulation (05/20)

zhoumi_kuixian

Coagulation (05/20)

Oct 30, 2011 19:12

So I didn't die. I was here all along, thinking about what a bad person I am. I really am very very sorry to all of those who continue to have faith in this fic. I have just started the new school year, and it came with a whole lot of new responsibilities. For those of you familiar with the Australian school system - I just started the HSC/VCE, to ( Read more... )

yunho, junsu, yoochun, jaejoong, yunjae, tvxq, coagulation, changmin, super junior, dbsk, eunhae

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shinchul303 October 30 2011, 15:18:07 UTC

If it's allowed...spot.

shinchul303 October 30 2011, 15:34:45 UTC

“It was the second time I had ever seen YunHo look so fragile, and I was so terrified that I would break him. He was always so confident in everything, when I saw him like that... I didn't know what to do...” Jae's voice was soft. “So I did what he would have done for me. I took him to the roof and I held him while he cried. I held him tightly while he thought, and I spoke calming words until he could breathe again...”

This is such a satisfying resolution to the last chapter's cliffhanger! It will be very interesting to see how Jaeho reveal their relationship to the other members, and how the family comes together to shield them from the outside world.

At least in my romantic vision of this. How you write it may be entirely different.

zhoumi_kuixian October 31 2011, 08:58:24 UTC

Thank you so so much for reviewing! I am so glad you are still interested, even though I have been very neglectful ;A; you really are a godsend <3 haha!
I am so so excited about the next chapter, because a few of those anticipations of yours will be adressed very soon ^^
Really and truely, thank you so so much for your reviews ^^ they make my day every time!!

dreamweever126 December 20 2011, 18:09:32 UTC

This chap made me feel all warm and fluffy inside. *sigh* interesting to read an LSM character to be good. Hmmm... Great chap.!

zhoumi_kuixian December 21 2011, 01:02:29 UTC

I actually have nothing against Lee SooMan-nim.
I assure you, a lot of people hate me for it, but I have a lot of respect for im, and I believe the issuaes faced by DBSK and Super Junior aren't his fault. He owns the company, he doesn't run it. So in this fic, I wanted to make sure that I could give him a positive light, instead of making everything his fault like I usually read :)