Coagulation (09/20)

Jan 13, 2012 19:23

W00t! I actualy kinda like this chapter ^^ and I hope you do too~ I know there's not that much MinJong in it, far less than usual. I just want to say thank you to everyone reading this. I know, I take a long time with the updates and it is very bad as me. I really do promise that I'm trying. I have a plan for an EunHae, but I think I will probably ( Read more... )

yunho, junsu, yoochun, jaejoong, heechul, yunjae, coagulation, changmin, dbsk

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dreamweever126 January 13 2012, 08:40:57 UTC
SPOT!!!

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dreamweever126 January 13 2012, 08:55:55 UTC
woah first comment twice in a row! i feel like a ninja XD anyway, i liked this chap. i like their fight. and honey those three words at the end killed me!!! me likey :)

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 09:26:38 UTC
:D I'm so glad you liked it ^^ JWFVEWJFVJQWE Your reviews always make me feel so happy ^^ <3 I was a little unsure about the end, but after your words, I rather like it, too!
WEFHWQF <3

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snow_meow January 13 2012, 09:26:28 UTC
Seriously YunJae can really argue until they wear each other out.
It's amazing the other members can stand this.

For a person who was so fixated in not losing someone, Jaejoong did a really poor job. Obviously there are other things in life more important to him than Yunho. He just has learn what it is at this age.

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 09:31:44 UTC
I agree. Fights like theirs would drive me insane *-*

What do you mean? I mean, later in the fic you will see more and more of the reasoning as to why Jae did let YunHo go, more and more detail will be discovered the further in you get, I assure you.

Thanks so much for the review ^^

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drumminsheep January 13 2012, 13:20:50 UTC
wow, it's pretty long! brb proper comment later

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 13:35:47 UTC
I look forward to it ^^

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sorry I took real long drumminsheep January 15 2012, 03:04:40 UTC
Yeah, I think Jaejoong wasn't seeing Yunho's point, and boy if that was me I'd be in some sort of guilt trip. But I'm glad he isn't beating himself up for it coz it ain't good for anybody.
I KNEW HEECHUL WOULD BE WRONG! Jaejoong would let him go!
not that I'm happy about that, of course.

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Re: sorry I took real long zhoumi_kuixian January 15 2012, 04:24:35 UTC
Hahaha it;s okay ^^
I tried my best to make the fight as realistic as possible, I hope it worked. I'd be beating myself up too :/ I seriously do not know how he wouldn't be haha!
Well, I won't give away anything for the future ^^ I don't want to let slip any spoilers~
I hope you can wait for the next chapter :D

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rainycakes January 13 2012, 13:32:30 UTC
OMG The super glue! DX Poor Yunho T__T And the way it ended! I was so into this chapter, I almost gasped! :O

I hope there aren't any added bad things that happen. :( I'm getting nervous from Jae's super hotness. LOL I hope nothing scary happens to him because he's so damn irresistible. :O

Aside from all of that and the fighting...well, maybe I like the fighting, too, since it leads to some passionate lovin~ kekeke But I like the way you write YunJae together~ They're so cute and sweet and sexy. ;D

I look forward to the next chapter; it'll be interesting to read your interpretation of the events to come. :)

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 13:35:31 UTC
Hahhaa ^^ thank you so much for your review :D
The poisoning is one of the most famous occurances in the fandom, I'm so glad you liked the way I did it ^^
And thanks so much on what you said about the way I write their relationship :D
Your reviews make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside~

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mcflurryaddict January 13 2012, 13:58:10 UTC
hi there! let me just profess my love for this fic. it seems sooo true, i tend to blur it with reality sometimes haha. i've been looking for a fic where yunjae doesn't end up with each other (i'm assuming you're heading to that direction based on this chap or will they meet up again and live happily ever after?!)and i'm glad i found yours on tumblr. i know that's so masochist of me, but i always imagine it like this: even though they don't end up together and have their own wives/families, they still consider each other as their one great love. they may have regrets, thoughts of 'what ifs' but they are still able to smile thinking of all the memories they shared together. you get what i'm saying? haha.

anyhoo, keep up the good work! i'll be patiently waiting for chapter 10. :)))

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 14:03:06 UTC
;A; thank you so much!! I never realised how popular it was sobs. You have no idea how happy your review makes me feel <3
Well~ I have the entire fic planned out, and I won't give anything away for the future chapters, so my lips are sealed ;) but I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic! I do understand what you mean. I agree that even if they do have amilies in the future, their love for each other will always outweigh that~ THOUGH I WANT THEM TO GET MARRIED >.< hahaha!!

I'll work on chapter ten asap! Thanks so much!

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mcflurryaddict January 13 2012, 14:27:09 UTC
IKR. why is being gay such a taboo in korean society?! if it weren't for that, maybe yunjae has gone public bahahaha XDDD

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zhoumi_kuixian January 13 2012, 14:28:01 UTC
Who knws, one day they might ^^

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