i'm not much of a poet, but i can't even imagine how long it took you to write this. it's beautiful. the structure is fabulous (i love how the sections build on each other). and i LOVE that you used sylfaen because honestly that should be the only font in the world.
I'm highly impressed. An early thought was that there is almost too much description, then it reminded me suddenly of Allen Ginsberg's "Sunflowers" and all the description seemed appropriate.
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thank you! great work.
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This is amazing & beautiful.
I write poems myself, but nothing near as good as this..
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with all the poets heart within my, i love it.
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Beautiful.
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