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Jul 09, 2008 23:55
Auburn moon grinning,
the Earth burns under my feet.
And I feel nothing.
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almstanne
July 13 2008, 20:05:22 UTC
I was going to try my hand at interpreting this, but I don't know that I should. I see a lot of interpretations here.
I like it and I feel like the moon is mocking me.
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deezine
July 14 2008, 20:06:09 UTC
"Grinning" here does give off the impression of mocking! Now if you said "Cheddar cheese moon grinning"...I don't think that a cheddar cheese moon would mock me. Does this mean "Auburn" is such a sophisticated color that it must mock others?
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rhavey
July 17 2008, 14:39:14 UTC
Or is the moon simply in Auburn, CA?
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I like it and I feel like the moon is mocking me.
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