Let Hope Burn In Your Eyes [2/?]

[zimothy]

Title: Let Hope Burn in Your Eyes [2/?]
Fandom: X-Men
Words: 4,500
Summary: Erik never expected to have to take a kid for ransom, let alone the persistently
annoying Charles Xavier.

Warning(s): Character abuse, Stockholm Syndrome/Lima Syndrome, Underage Character

It was two hours before Erik heard another peep from Charles, and even then, he had a

Comments

[zimothy]

OF COURSE YOU WOULD LOOK FORWARD TO ERIK RAGING. YOU HORRIBLE PERSON.
(I am too, I regret nothing. <3)
haha, yes Erik seems like an impatient person, so i can totally see him tossing Charles around for convenience sake.

[azryal]

Oh, I like it. I like it a lot.

Still, I would like Erik to get a smack in the face. Really.

There is more coming, yes? Please??

Mae

[zimothy]

oh, there's more! I just wish other authors would update to help kick my butt into gear. haha!

[stickman_saga]

I am really enjoying this so far. Charles is wonderfully precocious and doesn't take a hint, and Erik's frustration and inability to deal with another person in his space like a normal human being, and their awkward interactions where neither is sure of the other - it's very well done. I look forward to more.

[zimothy]

aldskfjasdf thank you so much for such lovely feedback! My favorite ones are the kind that pick out the details that they enjoy. <33 Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up in a day or two. *D*

[celectis]

I hope that there is more sooooon. Also, I really hope that Charles wont get punished for not...bringing in some ransom money for Erik.;;

[zimothy]

I can't tell you if he does or doesn't, but I will tell you that it'll happen in the next chapter or two. :D