"Frost" commentary, for tsuki_no_bara

[zionsstarfish]

Frost (with bonus commentary!)
by zionsstarfish
PG-13, some m/m interaction, post DT.
~6000 words.
Disclaimer: not mine; just playing.
Summary: for the spn_north challenge: Nunavut.
A/N: Thanks, as always, to luzmaria8 for the support, hand-holding, and for letting me riff off her story, Tortoise and Hare. ♥

You work with what you are given
the red clay of grief,
the black clay of

Comments

[tsuki_no_bara]

my three favorite parts of this fic are still the line about the earflaps, dean with the puppy (including him making a face like a dying goldfish, which never fails to crack me up), and dean putting sam's hand against the pulse in his neck to show sam that he's alive and he's ok.

i didn't think the comparison with the sisters was too anvilicious, and one of the nice things about reading your commentary is i had no idea what "qapsituqpa" meant, even tho i probably could've figured it out from the context.

[zionsstarfish]

aww, thank you :) ♥

up next: house & home.

Help!

[ladyra]

Hey there,

I really want to read this story because it was very nicely recced on thechicagoloop site, but I'd rather read it without the commentary. Is it posted somewhere? I tried to get into the link from your users page to your SPN stories, but it wouldn't allow me too.

Thanks!