254: Longest day of your life (part three)

Nov 28, 2008 02:15

12:47 pm

Her mother jostles her. Wake up, Zipporah. Time to go to school.

I don't want to.

What of it? Wake up. Wake up. Insistent fingers at her shoulder.

Leave me alone.

Then her mother bites her hard on the hand and she cries out, jerking back to wakefulness, to pain. There's a flurry of wings and a harsh croaking, and she ( Read more... )

prompts, tm

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shaman_x November 28 2008, 11:03:07 UTC
*applauds*

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:22:12 UTC
Thank you very much.

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shaman_x November 28 2008, 11:25:53 UTC
That was most excellent.

And, also, like, 17K words! Dude!

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:27:10 UTC
Glad you enjoyed. :)

Yeahhhh pretty close to. I think around 16,800 for the final tally.

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sand_andwater November 28 2008, 11:27:20 UTC
tl; dr

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:31:48 UTC
*whacks with a nerf hammer*

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sand_andwater November 28 2008, 11:35:29 UTC
You know I love this though I still think it could have been longer. :)

*flees*

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:36:09 UTC
FOR THIS YOU GET ZIPPY'S ANGRY FACE

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whatstheddx November 28 2008, 11:28:58 UTC
So, longest day of your life ended up being longest fic of your life, eh?

So, off I go to read from the beginning...!

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:32:13 UTC
*hands you water for your trip, and possibly an emergency flare for if you get lost*

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whatstheddx November 28 2008, 11:34:03 UTC
Haha, it's crazy, though, isn't it? The first ever prompt I wrote for House ended up being 10K words long. I finished it and was like, "Holy shit, HOW".

*takes!*

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 11:35:15 UTC
I've hit ten-k before with another prompt, for onewingbloody, which was miles easier to write than this thing. If we count the 8700-word first draft I threw out, I wrote near 25K to end up with this.

Fucking writing.

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alan_shore November 28 2008, 20:22:22 UTC
Whew. That was phenomenal. I'll try and scrape together some more coherent thoughts later ;)

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zippyknowsbest November 28 2008, 23:13:06 UTC
N'awwww. :D Glad you liked.

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