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zito_mira

BJ Fic: The Cold (Between)

Apr 23, 2005 11:05

Title: The Cold (Between)
Fandom: Blind Justice
Rating: K+
Pairings: Open to interpretation.
Warnings: Character death.
Summary: Inspired by a dream I had of trying to recognize a corpse while I was blind.

Enjoy!

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Comments 21

x_jerseygirl April 23 2005, 15:38:46 UTC

I remember they are (they were) a deep chocolate brown. Oh boy..

“Russo?” he calls out to me. *gasp* Finally! :-D

I loved it. Loved it. I love the Marty POV, I love the chemistry between dead Karen and Jim, I loved it. Is there going to be a sequel (I hope!)?

zito_mira April 24 2005, 15:25:50 UTC

Is there going to be a sequel (I hope!)?

*shrugs*
I planned just a stand alone. I'm not sure where I could pick up. Any ideas?

bluedelft April 23 2005, 16:00:31 UTC

Wow - I really liked that. As I was reading I could picture the whole thing happening in my head - which to me is a great thing.

Karen and Jim are such great partners and if anything was to happen to either one the other one would feel the lose.

zito_mira April 24 2005, 15:20:20 UTC

...if anything was to happen to either one the other one would feel the lose.
That's the vibe I'm getting. I think they need to be partnered a little bit longer to be, you know... all tight-n-shit, but they're definitely getting there.

bluedelft April 24 2005, 15:30:27 UTC

I know that I have liked watching the relationship develop on the show. I think they make great partners but I'm curious to see what is going to happen with Karen's bodyfriend and Jim knowing what he does about the guy

zito_mira April 24 2005, 16:11:50 UTC

I picture him to be the over-protective type, now that he relies on Karen (which he does, no matter how much he may try to tell himself that he can do his job on his own). I figured since Karen looks out for him, he'd be right on the ball when he needed to look out for her.

I know it's material to look foreward til next week, but I'm a little shocked he didn't do anything when she said she was going out.

*shrugs* maybe I'm looking into things too much.

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redrush April 23 2005, 16:09:05 UTC

I liked this. All the unknowns makes it a great little snippet.

zito_mira April 24 2005, 15:15:44 UTC

My favorite kinds of fics leave bits to the imagination. I'm glad you noticed. I hope none of it was too vague. :)

thanks for the review!

mercedeslove April 23 2005, 16:46:26 UTC

wow this was really good, Russo has a human side.

You did a good job with this.

aaricia April 23 2005, 18:39:09 UTC

Noooooo! And here I was hoping for Dead!Christie ;) Fantastic ficlet though. And Russo's human, who knew? *wink*

zito_mira April 24 2005, 15:17:49 UTC

Actually, it was Dead!Christie, but I've already done that so I figured I'd shake things up a bit. Also, I liked the possibilities presented if Karen were to die.

Yeah, Russo's starting to grow on me:)

aaricia April 24 2005, 19:49:53 UTC

Actually, it was Dead!Christie
Rats! Still, that made me feel better :)

Oh, man, if TPTB ever kill anyone off I hope it's not Karen. And I'm not saying that just because of the ship :)

I really liked Marty this last ep. There were a few times when he looked like he wanted to start some shit with Jim, but then you could see him get it together. He's trying, and that makes me love him.