Seeing Stars (1/2)

[zivaontour]

Pepa is trailing hot kisses down Silvia’s neck and across her collarbone, one hand is stroking her lower back, dipping under the waistband of Silvia’s jeans and lightly scraping the flesh with short nails.  Silvia can’t put to words exactly what it is she’s feeling, but she knows it’s strong and it’s needy and it’s not like anything she has ever

Comments

[xejanfan]

ok, i thought i commented on this story but i guess not, sorry! but this was some crazy hot smut! i loved it! i can't wait for the second part where pepa sees stars! thanks for sharing!

[zivaontour]

You did!

I posted it on my journal and on the Pepsi community journal - just to make it easier for me to find later, cause I'm tag lazy. :-D

Just posted the second chapter. Thanks for the kick in the butt to get it finished and up. Hope you like it.

[selinakris]

yowzers!!! that was erm... just... phew!! And there's another part up. *runs off to read next part*

[zivaontour]

Thanks! I like to think there's a little bit of a knack in the mix somewhere... ;)

No, seriously, I really appreciate it. Writing insecurities quadruple when it comes to smut - at least for me.

It was actually, and it got a fair amount of votes - but there were a lot of really really fantastic stories in the smutfest.

The second chapter is up... um, somewhere. As I've said before, I'm tag lazy. If you can't find it I'll do some searching and post a link.

[bitxaustin]

So ridiculously smutworthy you had ME seeing stars. I think I love you! lol Off to find the second part!