CB: Chapter Two: Broken Pieces

[zoe_jayne]

Title: Broken Pieces
Characters: Mal, Zoe, Kaylee, Simon, River and of course... the star of our fic, Jayne.

Series: Cloudburst

Beta: Vaguely, Rin. Because I like to torture her.

Warnings: Violence, Nudity and Insanity

Words: 1902

Comments

[rinalin]

I've read it three times already!

THREE!

And I love every word ('cept the ones I had you fix ;))!

Just completely worth the wait. Oh. My. God.

And the bench pressing... could not be more erotic! And... yeah...

I'll be in my bunk.

[zoe_jayne]

I *totally* blame him. It was that discussion you know... about him being a scorpio. And... well. yeah.

[ambassadorserra]

I think you should ALL be in your bunks.
~wanders off for coffee and stuff.....with things~

[zoe_jayne]

*Hugs* Dee

Now Miz Serra...surely we can have stuff...with things...IN our bunks.

With pancakes.

Or beans.

>.>

<.

[aliaspiral]

*sigh* oh Jayne, you stubborn big idiot. *cuddles* so hurt and so mad, and oh.

However, this line fills me with confusion...

She slipped off his bunk and carefully stowed away the colourfully handpainted present under his bed.

She handpainted Jayne a sweater? did i miss a line?

[zoe_jayne]

ah no..must clarify that. Kaylee knitted him a sweater, and then handpainted the wrapping paper since the supply is rather limited in the Black.

:D

Hope everything else was okay?

[rinalin]

Heee... had to read again. I just love it.

"Baynard came and when..." still needs to be fixed.

[zoe_jayne]

LOL Fixed. Finally