New fic: Pale

[zoetrope]

So, because rageprufrock is such a good friend, she often entertains me when I'm down with little snippets of delicious fic. In return, I do the same - which doesn't seem a very fair trade, but I'm getting the better end of the deal so I don't mind! As a result, she is demanding I post the following:

Title: Pale
Rating: R
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: Set

Comments

[annemjw]

Especially as Merlin had kicked Arthur in the shin for the 'sweat' comment immediately the director had called 'cut'.

Immediately 'after', maybe :D

Oh boys.

I loved this, it was great to feel the tension of it and poor mErlin having sweaty hands :D

Thanks for writing it!

[ladyvyola]

"Immediately" by itself is a proper usage.

Just not a very American one. *g*

[annemjw]

Ah, I see, though it still needs a comma there then :D

How odd, I read that sentence as utterly one way and not any other!

[ladyvyola]

Nope, no comma needed.

Wacky Brits.

It's rather like "in hospital" or "at university" -- so wrong to my ear.

[cat_77]

Awesome! And a wonderful fit for the universe as a whole. *g*

[bentley]

That was so sweet! I love Merlin's moment of disconnect - and watching themselves after, mmm. Ah, this universe. ♥

[inteligrrl]

*hearts* Epic win, and a joy to find on a dismally cold December night.

[meredyth_13]

Anything ... ANYTHING in the DRP world is wonderful, when it fits so neatly with Pru's original works. This is lovely - charming and awkward, just like the boys, with that hint of edgy, kinky and hot Arthur at the end.

Have added this one to my DRP folder for keeping. So glad Pru let us know about this one. (and so envious that you get to exchange ficbits with her - now the envy goes both ways :D ).