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zofbadfaith

Needed Dare [Hermione Granger]

May 14, 2009 17:15

Title: Needed Dare
Author: Zee
Fandom: Harry Potter
Claim: Hermione Granger (Hermione/Pansy, Ginny/Luna, past mentions of Hermione/Ginny)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Femmeslash, drunk people and some bad language
Word count: 1.436 words
Summary: "Better a hussy than a pussy, right?"
Author's notes: Written for 5drunkfics claim on Hermione Granger, but none of ( Read more... )

fic: needed dare, pairing: pansy/hermione, pairing: ginny/luna, 5drunkfics

Comments 36

anonymous May 14 2009, 21:29:12 UTC

hahaaa! "You nuzzled my bosom in front of my girlfriend, you owe me."
"I’m going to show you who the pussy here is."

I love this, because the dialogue was genuinely funny.

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zofbadfaith May 14 2009, 22:22:42 UTC

Hah, it's okay J :)
And thanks! :D Seeing as they were drunk, I tried to keep the dialogue as funnier as I could, and keeping the characterization. I'm glad it worked :D
And thanks!

arobynsung May 14 2009, 23:07:03 UTC

Funny and sweet :)
Love ♥

zofbadfaith May 15 2009, 00:42:09 UTC

Hee, thanks! :D
♥

doctor_jemima May 15 2009, 00:00:32 UTC

I really enjoyed this - Hermione and Pansy are my personal fav, so of course I loved the end. And I really liked your dialogue as well, the whole pussy/hussy convo was very funny.

zofbadfaith May 15 2009, 00:45:00 UTC

I grew very fond of Hermione/Pansy the last couple of months, but my love for Hermione/Ginny is pretty big to let go. The pussy/hussy was actually unintentional, but I'm glad it worked out to be funny in the end! :)
Thanks for reviewing!

expired_sanity May 15 2009, 00:01:00 UTC

I adore your drunk Hermione, she is so adorable. The bosom nuzzling was great too.

zofbadfaith May 15 2009, 00:48:02 UTC

I hope you think her adorable still when she's even drunker :D There will also be more bosom nuzzling and maybe some other fine bits nuzzling, I hope! hah
Thanks for commenting :D

expired_sanity May 15 2009, 01:20:46 UTC

*pushes more firewhiskey at Hermione* I'm pretty sure I will, and I can't wait to find out (I also can't wait for the nuzzling) ;)

zofbadfaith May 15 2009, 17:35:15 UTC

Yay! :D Thanks, I'll try not to keep you waiting too long ;)

mamabasto May 15 2009, 07:32:54 UTC

Aww... drunk Hermione is adorable. All her insecurities just hangout. :D

zofbadfaith May 15 2009, 17:37:37 UTC

Isn't she? :D I always thought she's be the cutest when drunk. And because she's mostly secure of everything, I thought I'd let the insecurities show a bit ;) Thanks for commenting :D :D