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zofbadfaith

Her lunch never took long to heat;

Aug 24, 2010 13:04

Title. Her lunch never took long to heat
Author. Zee
Pairing. Hermione/Luna (Ginny/Pansy)
Rating. PG/PG13
Word Count. ~3400
Summary. It was good to go.
Warnings. Uh.. Short lines and fluff.
Disclaimer. Not mine, not making any profit out of it.
Author Notes. I wrote this last time, just after I started my temp job. It isn't by any means ( Read more... )

pairing: hermione/luna, fic: her lunch, pairiring: ginny/pansy

Comments 8

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zofbadfaith August 25 2010, 15:03:58 UTC

Yay, thanks :3
I wouldn't say again, but, yeah, it's good trying to write something from time to time. :)

carinjo August 25 2010, 08:39:58 UTC

i could feel her loneliness and how detached she was in muggle world. and luna was great. loved it.

zofbadfaith August 25 2010, 15:06:27 UTC

Most people feel like that when they're not comfortable somewhere, I think. I know I do, hah.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

attributive_adj August 28 2010, 20:12:11 UTC

It was very sweet. Sad at the beginning, though. I love Luna, here. I would have forgiven as well, if only because Hermione asked. I believe that you can trully forgive someone if they ask for forgiveness.

Good job.

I hope you're okay, love.

<3

zofbadfaith August 30 2010, 15:21:22 UTC

I don't really think Hermione would have forgiven herself if things had turned out differently. Luckily she had Luna to save her. :)

Things are okay, mostly. :)

<3

attributive_adj August 30 2010, 18:51:29 UTC

Mmmmm, I don't know! In my experience, 99,99% people tend to find the best excuses ever for treating someone poorly, for having done something wrong, for not feeling guilty about the way they act or whatever... No matter how good this person is, it's always easier to tell yourself that the other's a complete arse, than tell yourself that YOU are a complete arse. Surely, I must be like that as well. *shrugs*
Some rare people are sweet enough to forgive, though, and I could totally picture Lune being one of those rare people. It fitted perfectly for me.

I know you're busy, but let me know from time to time how you are, please.

Love you.

nooneami November 12 2010, 03:44:23 UTC

That was so beautifully written, sad (for the most part) but not mournful, really lovely. I love how you paced it, it stretches out perfectly, I didn't think I could bear to see Hermione like that for much longer but you made it last just long enough. How she was at her workplace..seriously well done, it's so unlike her to be subdued and mechanical and yet given the context, it made perfect sense.

And honestly, from that much sadness I wasn't expecting a happy ending, so it was a bit like having a tear almost wrenched out of you and then turned into a smile. Just wow :)

zofbadfaith November 12 2010, 21:09:08 UTC

Thanks, really. I usually think people dislike my writing style because it can be confusing sometimes, so it makes me really happy to know you liked it. The way she was at the workplace... well, I might've had a bit of experience there.

Again, thank you so much for taking the time to read this; means a lot.