Sticks;

[zofbadfaith]

Title. Sticks
Author. Zee
Pairings. Ginny/Pansy
Rating. PG13
Summary. Nasty habits.
Warnings. Italics, crossed out words.
Disclaimer. Not mine babab.
Author Notes. So I had nothing to do and Cookie said "write!" and then she said Quidditch - Ginny - Pansy - Liquorice sticks. The Quidditch's missing a bit, though. I think I wrote this in 40 minutes

Comments

[peskywhistpaw]

I love the tone of this, and the snark of (and eventual softness to) Ginny's struck-through thoughts. This part:

If you asked Ginny, the woman could use some fun sun - maybe spend a few hours riding a bloke a broom?

...made me snort out loud.

But the sweetness at the end is really lovely, too.

[zofbadfaith]

I was really happy with the snark, because it's not something I get right every time I write. I'm really happy it made you snort, though :D I <3 snorts.

This is such a nice comment, thanks :D

[lash_larue]

Fun!

I like Pansy blushing, and the maybe-start of something between them. Really a nice story, good on you!
L

[zofbadfaith]

I wasn't so sure if Pansy blushing was into character... but if you like it, I'm sure I did it right ;)

Thanks, Lash!
<3

[zagury]

HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN TRYING TO GET YOU TO WRITE?

And all it took was a msg saying I was naked.

Secret formula.

But no seriously I love this. And I love your Pansy. And you. In general.

Okay turning off my computer to go lay in bed and think about airports and hotels and crying fits? Maybe not crying fits. Maybe you shouldn't keep me up so late.

<3

[zofbadfaith]

MONTHS!

But I've no idea what you're talking about.
Msg saying you were naked? I remember nothing of this *coughs*

I'm glad you love it, since it was your request ;P
And I'm embarrassed. You're silly.

And forget about the crying fits for now. Just airports and hotels and hanging out. I'm sorry I kept you up to late :3 hahah

<3

[redbeargrl]

I love this! Normally I would question the use of the strikeouts, but in this case it works like a window into Ginny's mind. And oh what a naughty little mind it is too.
Good characterizations and interplay. Well done Zee!
(Zagury plied you with her nakedness to write this? I love that! I guess that makes Ginny not the only one with a naughty mind.)

[zofbadfaith]

Hee, thanks! I usually wouldn't use the strikeouts, but it just seemed very fitting after I started writing... I'm glad it worked :D
Thank you :3 I really enjoyed writing it!
(No! But I... I don't even know how to explain the circumstances hahah But it wasn't like that at all, I swear! *sigh* I'm already blushing.)

[zagury]

Obviously the only way to get her to write is to tempt her with naked messages!

[zofbadfaith]

THAT'S A LIE!

[zofbadfaith]

I was so amused with myself for writing that XD

Aww thanks! *o* Sometimes I struggle with some things when I'm writing, like writing characters snarky and edgy. I'm glad you liked it! ;)