As part of my 2012 writing initiative, I've declared a freeze new stories to encourage plowing through the wip pile. The goal was to write at least 1k today of either: shaving fic (hahahah, what), croon at the moon (aha), fic exchange mystery surprise story,
dog shelter au, dog transformation au, het werewolf porn, gay werewolf porn,
zombie au 1,
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I feel like--hmm. Social Luca. Yes. And social Charles--I keep on writing this and going, "this is going to be so much worse for a telepath," and there are so many things I will reuse, I think, not exactly but in spirit. Isolation and dependence is what it's all about here ( ... )
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...stuff I read in books, I guess, which is actually a lot of stuff, so this joke is totally not panning out.
IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A MATH JOKE.
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I fucking love Kane here, ohmyfuckinggod. I am glad you like the hunger thing. Kane here has no concept of desire--he cannot recognize it for what it is when he's never known it. What's it like to want something besides revenge? etc
(SEE, KANE AND ERIK ARE NEARLY THE SAME CHARACTER IN MY HEAD. It's so embarrassing. Kane is giving me such a dubious look with Gaspard's face.)
I love fuck upery going both ways. Yes.
In the version of this I started, like, two years ago with my friend--it's very different--Luca remains a lot more coherent/resisting, but, I mean, no. Sensory deprivation and solitary confinement and eating out of his kidnapper's hand. He's fucked.
I need to let Kane allow him to talk soon, though, hahah. The lack of dialog is kind of odd.
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Oh yes, I love that Kane simply doesn't recognise desire - that he is so out of touch with himself - and yep, I can see it - Kane is pretty much Erik. I love both their characterisations! It's so true with Erik! He is so clueless about so many things, I love it. Except when it leads to The Divorce, then I go: WHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY???????????
Mmm, yes. Luca is pretty much fucked, isn't he? Can't wait to see what happens next - in a hiding-behind-the-sofa kind of way. :)
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