Comments | zoo_gnosis: Alone

ehxhfdl14 in zoo_gnosis

Alone

Mar 07, 2008 16:26

He was alone.

A mere hour ago he’d had a home, a family. Now he was alone.

His parents’ territory was safe, the den located behind a thick tangle of thorn-bushes. There was no Mustang pack around; none came, not after his Edward-father had killed the young Mustang. The predator had strayed into their territory- not ours, his parents’- and ( Read more... )

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truly_wished March 8 2008, 04:13:28 UTC

This is very nice. Extremely well written!

ehxhfdl14 March 8 2008, 04:29:16 UTC

Thank you so much!Glad you enjoyed it =^-^=

silkendreammaid March 8 2008, 06:18:36 UTC

smiles... so now i can pick on your grammar?...lol..
so good to see you write something... i like this...

silken :)

ehxhfdl14 March 8 2008, 07:39:03 UTC

*incoherent babble*
Since when were you on LJ? *Adding*

And yes, pick at my grammar all you want ;)
The rabid bunny wouldn't let me sleep, and I literally was forced to run to my work table in order to get the laptop. In a slip nightgown, no less. DX

silkendreammaid March 8 2008, 07:45:02 UTC

i've been here awhile...laughs...
well, you've done it now... giving in to that first bunny signs the hunting license... they're going to be watching you closely now...grins... wait til they jump you in the shower...

silken :)

ehxhfdl14 March 8 2008, 07:50:59 UTC

@-@;;;;;

Very, so very afraid. Mostly because I know I'll jump out of the shower.

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polw March 8 2008, 17:26:35 UTC

keep on writing!
this is very good.
thank you for keeping this site alive!

ehxhfdl14 March 8 2008, 19:53:21 UTC

Couldn't let zoofics die quietly, now could I? ^-^
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you :)

spirixx March 13 2008, 05:14:14 UTC

You wrote something! YAY! I hope you put it up on FF.net too. :D

ehxhfdl14 March 13 2008, 05:20:20 UTC

How did you even find me? XD
Hmm, zoofics are a bit too interwoven and complicated to post to FF.net, I think :/
Bunnies have been...gnawing on me all of a sudden. Wonder how long I can hold out? O-O

blue_stem_cell March 21 2008, 15:34:00 UTC

For you first fanfiction, I'm amazed. You've perfectly shown what happens all the time in a nature, but i did feel a little sorry for the Ed. XD
Good luck and keep on writing ^^

ehxhfdl14 March 22 2008, 02:25:04 UTC

Thank you for the comment♥
I have a thing for animals and their behavior, so that affected my fic *slightly*... (laugh)
I did want to write a sequel to this, but I feel bad about doing that to the Edward so I'm going to draw a pic instead... Even though I have so many things to draw and do XD