The Jungle Book Effect

[blue_stem_cell]

Title: The Jungle Book Effect
Author: Blue_Stem_cell
Pairing: Ed/al (sort of) ;D
Genre: Zoofic/Romance/Drama
Rating: 17+ (this chapter)
Summary: An adolescent Elric pair are found injured out in the streets. The Alphonse covers the unconscious Edward protectively but a closer look reveals something not quite right with it.  Is that really an Elric?

Comments

[brightygurl]

>>;;
<<;; Indeed!

[blue_stem_cell]

I said not to think about it too much DX Sorry XD

[sky_dark]

Very interesting, a human raised by Elrics? <3 So nice to see a story in this comm again <3

[blue_stem_cell]

^^ It's what I was going for...I hope nobody minds it as I seem to have a fascination with feral children and the studies of them. -.-
<3

[sky_dark]

It's a fascinating concept and I can't wait for the continuation <3

[blue_stem_cell]

I'm working on it as I type. ;D
But I must say that you where sort of my inspiration for this kind of fanfiction. My friend sent me a link and I was pulled into the story straight away! ^^ So thankyou, and I hope that didn't seem a little stalker-ish XD
<3

[romyra]

A very interesting premise. I'll definitely be looking here for more of this.

[blue_stem_cell]

thankyou, I hope you enjoy it. ^^

[engine_blue]

Hello! Nice to meet you! I'm pretty new to Lj too, but I like to give really in depth comments when people ask for them. So I have a lot of thoughts for you! :)

Feral children! Crazy. But the real-life cases really are fascinating. With this "Edward" so steeped into the Elric life, it'll be interesting to see what happens to him and Alphonse!

Your pron scene is really steamy and fun. I got some very detailed images as well, that were really heartwarming and made me go, "Awww!" (Like "Ed" looking over his shoulder at Al, and Al against his shoulderblades.) In your fic here, Al is such a lover! <3 He's possessive, dominant, and totally in control. But lovely too. Woo

[blue_stem_cell]

Thankyou so much for the in depth comment. People tell me all the time I type to fast for my own good, and yes my grammar is very terrible so i apologise for that ^^. DX I'm really no sure how I came to get a B in highschool English. XD
I've always spelt Okie like that, I guess it was just something that stuck ith me through Roleplaying.

I run back through this in the morning and try and correct it as much as I can. I so need to bag myself a proof read first before I go posting away. XD
and the click bit, I sure that's just another typo, unless I remember. XD

hehe *pets the Alphonse* He's very sweet to Edward, especially because he's so helpless and young. That, and feral children stories amaze me and i was pretty sure the same thing could be applied towards Alchemicals! XD

Part two is up and I have more along the way. Thank you so much for the warm welcome too. <3

[engine_blue]

you're welcome! It's very nice to have such a kind reply back. x3!

You make me want to write more zoo fic. I have one that's about er, well, that would give away the plot. But the same sort of maybe human maybe Elric genre--since you say you like it, I'll maybe have at least one reader! ;)

I've read part two! left you a comment there, too. ^__^

[blue_stem_cell]

Ive just looked over my last comment I left you. Wow, I really shouldn't reply to things at 2 in the morning. XD

I would love to read another story about this. *urges you on* and yes I would most likely be a reader of it!

[ehxhfdl14]

Ooh, how fun! Kind of like Blood Bound, Blood Brother in that there's a (probably) adopted human in the fic. Very nice, very nice. It's always an interesting concept to work with, even though most feral children stories in real life are made up, sadly enough.

The title might be better if it said The Jungle Book Effect rather than The Jungle Book Affect, I think ;)

Try to find a beta- if you can find someone willing to beta a zoofic, that is. Haha; It can squick some people, so it might be hard...

Anyhow, I'll just move on to the second part, yeah?

[blue_stem_cell]

Ahh Shoot! You're so right about the tittle! *mental kicks one self*
I'll go change that in a minute. Thank you for pointing that out. ^^

And yes most of the older stories are hoaxes, which is good in someway but the ones that are real have major health and social interaction problems. I guess it was something I wanted to work with. ^^

I'll ask my brother when I see him next, he was already looking over at my shoulder when writing. XD