The Jungle Book Effect (part 2)

[blue_stem_cell]

(part 1= http://community.livejournal.com/zoo_gnosis/60199.html#cutid1 )

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The Alphonse had been beside itself; however, with the help of the sedative it calmed down and eventually fell into a soft slumber, purring like a young kitten, despite its older age. Beth wiped the sweat from her brow and nodded towards the police to let it go, the

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[engine_blue]

first post! yay!

Your author comments are really fun. Also, I can't believe I get two installments in one night! How many do you have to put up? :)

This is going great and much fun. Ed's really lucky that he didn't have internal bleeding, and didn't break his ribs. Oh well, I'm sure half of him is a huge purple bruise. Poor guy. :<

keep up the good work! Lots of emotion in this. Yay!

[blue_stem_cell]

Big Purple bruise boy! Kid's going to be sore for quite a while XD
My brother was knocked over in the same way, it's pretty much what happened to him.

I'm sort of writing bits in between cleaning my house and working on my portfolio for university. ^^...there should be another one up tonight though. (late UK time)

Thank you <3

[ehxhfdl14]

Ooh, so how many parts are you thinking?
They should just let him see the Alphonse (and vice versa), they'd do that with mated pairs- and they are a pair, albeit an odd one. D:
So this is one of the fics that treat the Gunbu and Elrics more as animals? I see... (on a related note, they have special masks for performing CPRs on dogs.)
Can we get more descriptions of the boy later? For example, I don't believe we get a specific eye color. If you did, I apologize in advance for missing that.

[blue_stem_cell]

not too many, but not so short either. I already have a semi ending planned out, just got to fit the other bits around it.

They are a very odd pair! XD But yes, more like animals but I knew this one wouldn't work with them having ears and tails, for obvious reasons. XD
and I didn't know that. o.0...Learn something new everyday.

And don't worry, I'm getting to that bit ;D.
Oh and I changed the tittle. I feel rather silly for using the wrong word. XD
<3

[mikkeneko]

Psst -- In this part and the previous one, it really should be 'jungle book effect,' not 'affect.'

[blue_stem_cell]

I changed it -.-
Thanks for the point out though ^^

[firebird308]

Looks interesting so far. However, I really advise that you check over your spelling and punctuation. It'll help make people more inclined to read it.

[blue_stem_cell]

I'm going to go over them with a fine tooth comb, I guess I just got so excited about posting it that I just went head long into it.
Thank you for the comment ^^

[firebird308]

Your welcome. ^_^ Yeah, it's generally best to wait a couple of days after writing something when you aren't quite so 'Whee!' Gives you (general you) a chance to catch mistakes that would have been missed otherwise.

[blue_stem_cell]

I'll be doing that with later chapters, I have house work to catch up with XD. Whoops.
thankyou again =3