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Mar 22, 2008 22:57

Just hearing the boy whimper and sob into his chest made Jack want to curl up and cry too. None of this seemed very fair, were on earth had the human race gone so wrong that something like this happened? Had someone really not wanted this boy and left him to Mother Nature’s clutches, perhaps in the hopes that he would just perish?

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truly_wished March 23 2008, 00:30:16 UTC

Problem? Bambi's a great name, especially for an odd Edward. It's very cute, I love this story.

blue_stem_cell March 23 2008, 00:32:52 UTC

Yay ^^, The name just suddenly came to me. People name their pets daft things all the time, I know I do. XD
and thankyou ^^

darthneko March 23 2008, 13:45:17 UTC

Awww. I'm really liking this story. ^_^ And Bambi! Lol. He does seem like he was raised by Lings. [g]

blue_stem_cell March 23 2008, 13:58:39 UTC

Thank you. ^^ Jack was a very mischievous little boy, they where more like brothers, but I'll get onto that later. =3

ehxhfdl14 March 23 2008, 16:11:26 UTC

Bambi! Well, isn't he adorable :D
(Everyone reviewing are paying so much attention to him...laugh)
The Alphonse seems to have partially taken on the Edward's role, maybe since the "Edward" in the relationship can't do alchemy? Or perhaps he was just born as a dom?

blue_stem_cell March 23 2008, 16:22:53 UTC

XD...I love Bambi too, he's like the small playful dog everyone wants to take home. XD
Because the boy can't do alchemy, and the fact that Alphonse is a few years older than him, it's forced him to be more dominant. Besides, it'll make a great contrast for later on =3.

ehxhfdl14 March 23 2008, 19:40:13 UTC

For later on, eh?
Are you going to be writing about how they met later, and how the Alphonse reacted to the pseudo-Edward's "disability"? *is very interested*
Yeah, Bambi is just one of those characters that everyone loves, I think ^ㅅ^
Is his mate raised by them too, or from somewhere else?

blue_stem_cell March 23 2008, 22:38:43 UTC

I'm planning on writing that bit after I've put part 4 up (which shouldn't be long XD)I'm so happy it's interesting you ^^...
His mate is mentioned in the next bit, but yeah he was brought in so Bambi wouldn't get lonely and they could make lots of kittens. *is shot* XD <3

sky_dark March 23 2008, 21:36:54 UTC

Aw, I like Bambi <3

blue_stem_cell March 23 2008, 22:39:07 UTC

I'm very partial to him to =3