[FIC] Explanation for Using My Heart [Drabble]

Jun 19, 2008 14:37

Title: Explanation for Using My Heart
Pairings: YunJae
Length: really short
Author: zorata
Rating: PG
Genre: Take a guess
Summary: Why is Yunho using Jaejoong's heart?
Disclaimer: Prompt

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explanation for using my heart

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zorata June 20 2008, 06:32:13 UTC
hahaha I had you tricked then? XD

thanks for reading!

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yuxo June 20 2008, 00:39:39 UTC
......=_____________=

LOL. I like it, even if I do find YunJae/Jaeho a little hard to stomach. But I do like it. XD

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zorata June 20 2008, 06:34:38 UTC
XD you like HoMin instead ne? (sneaked a peek at your journal) I find homin a little hard to stomach sometimes too, so I totally understand you. Glad you liked it anyway! Thank you for reading~

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yuxo June 20 2008, 06:36:37 UTC
Hahaha yeah, that's how the shipping goes. XDDDD

WOOT, I TOTALLY understand what you mean about post-exams aslkfjasdlkjffsd. XDDDDDDDD FREEDOM, IT TASTES NICE! XD

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zorata June 20 2008, 07:00:41 UTC
hahaha did you finish you exams too? XD I was ecstatic too, but soon my adrenaline ran out and I'm about to collapse from exhaustion right now TT_TT writing an exam and then attend two meetings after that with only 4 hours of sleep just...doesn't work. (zzzzzzzzzzzz)

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chloe1910 June 20 2008, 00:56:50 UTC
OMO? Crack? bwhahaha..aish..I thought they were doing something naughty..

I think it's ok to link it to Strong Heart...what you should do is....you should write another drabble to continue their story...Maybe in this last installment, you could make Yunho realised that actually, he too has fallen in love with his best friend but did not confess for fear of losing their freindship? The ta-da..happy ending...*hopeful puppy eyes*

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blinkable June 20 2008, 04:39:54 UTC
Total in agreement..we are just sucker for happy ending JaeHo XD *hi5*

Or maybe something from YunHo's POV esp on scene during his cross physical exam on Jae

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zorata June 20 2008, 06:39:02 UTC
*high-fives*

yunho's point of view of this would be interesting...and probably very scientific XD I usually don't redo scenes, so writing that would be highly unlikely. Unless you want to write it for me~ 8D

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blinkable June 20 2008, 12:59:32 UTC
No not asking you to rewrite but to make Part 3 a Yunnie's POV on same scene xD

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zorata June 20 2008, 06:40:54 UTC
if I made it so that it connected to Strong Hearts explicitly, yunho will probably say something like this:

"Jae! Your heart was beating so fast just now, but how come I can't hear it anymore?!"

thanks for reading~~<3 =D

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aeri__iijiri June 20 2008, 01:32:24 UTC
hahaha, this is cute and very yunjae centered indeed despite it was more of a friendship level.

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zorata June 20 2008, 06:42:44 UTC
awww thanks~~~ I didn't go into detail the emotional aspect of this scene....but if you squint, you can see it at more than a friendship level 8D

thank you for reading~ =]

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