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zoryatwist

Addict Step1, part3

Jan 22, 2007 23:54

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addict, hp/dm

Comments 7

kykiske January 23 2007, 02:16:50 UTC

What a wonderful piece to come back from work to!!! I need MORE!!!!

niu_hana January 23 2007, 02:19:39 UTC

omg! i so thought that he was a goner! cool! spiffy! awesome! where's the hot sex? ::shifty eyes:: COOL!

lietothedevil January 23 2007, 02:55:40 UTC

i started to read your story a couple days ago, and i happen to like it. it's really good actually. i hope you update soon.

mickeylover303 January 23 2007, 18:33:04 UTC

Even though you hinted that Draco was still breathing, albeit shallowly, the suspense was still draining me. I think that's in part to your attention to detail. It draws out the events and makes it easier fall into the story.

enchanted_jae January 24 2007, 02:33:36 UTC

Something tells me Lucius Malfoy is going to regret having two vampires in his dungeon.

hehe zoryatwist January 24 2007, 06:27:31 UTC

jae you have good instincts, but I'm not that predictable