Comments | zoryatwist: In fameliare

zoryatwist

In fameliare

Aug 04, 2007 19:29

Title: In fameliare ( Read more... )

housemd

Comments 3

axmxz August 4 2007, 19:32:31 UTC

I'm *such* a sucker for a mommy!Wilson. XD Write on!

julia_bohemian August 4 2007, 20:10:06 UTC

This is great, beautiful. Loved the line about Wilson holding babies that were replacing siblings who had died of cancer. You make good use of imagery and descriptive words ( ... )

chaoskir August 5 2007, 07:48:48 UTC

I like this fragment of a story and a nice side effect: I read your story and I read the comment by Julia and in that way I learn a little bit english. It´s not my mother tongue and I´m really bad with this language but reading your fic and reading Julia´s explanation to the mistakes let me learn. Yep: A win-win-situation for me. Thank you for this interesting fragment of a story and thank you Julia for the english lesson.