Hello and have some fic!

[bamf_girl]

Hey there! I'm bamf_girl, and I'm relatively new to Avatar. So, I'm also new to your comm and the Avatar universe in general

Comments

[rowzen]

Excellent!

There are a few small spelling & grammatical issues, but your story's so good they really don't get in the way.

[bamf_girl]

Thank you so much! I'll have to comb through this again and fix my grammar, haha.

[quartzteeth]

Oh Zuko, there's nothing to be shameful about! we love it

I liked this, and the way you handled the firecest. that smug bitch lol.

Just one thing. Here...
His grandfather. His mother. And now, his grandfather
Is grandfather supposed to appear twice. If it is, then my bad. I was just a little confused XD

[bamf_girl]

Haha, no, I just wrote this at 2 in the morning. XD I'll go and fix it now, thanks for pointing it out, and thanks for reading!