PG: Test Spin

Sep 18, 2007 10:46

Title: Test Spin
Author: Zully Quirke (zully)
Pairing(s): Lee/Gaara
Rating: PG
Warnings: Only if you haven't seen the major Gaara fights.
Summary: Probably crack. Lee has the worst luck in the world and Gaara doesn't believe in chance.
Author's Notes: Inspired by a recent "Dare" and "Kiss" challenge I saw posted somewhere. Not necessarily a response to ( Read more... )

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magicalbrains September 19 2007, 03:07:18 UTC
YAY :D

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zully September 19 2007, 04:02:07 UTC
:D <3

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everysecondtues September 19 2007, 03:56:04 UTC
You have a couple of typos/other tiny errors and there's a sudden pov shift without a section break, but I really enjoyed this. Ahahahah at Gaara influencing the outcome with Lee. Kiba is awesomely evil. I loved Temari cheering when it was her turn. XD This is really good. <3

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zully September 19 2007, 04:01:32 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, the POV shift sort of happened while I was writing. I suppose you could call this a "stream of consciousness" fic. *laughs* I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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slashfiendchiru September 19 2007, 04:20:15 UTC
I love you, truly, madly, deeply. I love the idea of Gaara taking control of the bottle, and the ending made me crack up.

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zully September 19 2007, 04:26:35 UTC
Ourloveissotrue. <3

Thanks Chiru. Glad you dug it. :3

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zully September 19 2007, 16:04:12 UTC
Thanks! I always feel a little awkward when I write Gaara-- it's much easier for me to get into a "Lee" mindset. I'm glad you thought I did it decently and that my writing style was suitable. :)

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sabaku_lotus September 19 2007, 15:50:17 UTC
At first I didn't know but after the second time...(it had to be rigged!)

Man I was trying not to giggle throughout this; I didn't even noticed the pov shift! Some writer I am :P

But I liked the inside of Gaara's head interaction and his view on Konoha period. Also the reasons behind his interest in lee was just too cute for words

keep up the good work!

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zully September 19 2007, 16:03:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the shift wasn't glaringly obvious. :)

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